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I watch summer dreams light the sky
as I'm frozen in winter's nightmare
that little gleam of hope--of truth, willing to set me free
so again i could only add a phrase to it.. but i kinda think its good :)


thoughts? comments?


p.s who knows i might re-work this one sometime in the future, should i?
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Crazed-Writer's avatar
this is intense, short but still captures every ounce of the point.